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Some artwork from my side...

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Post by Vince T » Sat Apr 12, 2003 9:57 pm

Well, here we go. You may remember me having posted artwork from two of the main characters from my storry. Now, here's the third - <B>Shiromy Vaylon</B>. <P> Image
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Post by Ice Knight » Sat Apr 12, 2003 11:22 pm

hmmm...

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Post by Geekwithpower » Sat Apr 12, 2003 11:24 pm

Something about her face is very..odd
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Post by Vince T » Sun Apr 13, 2003 5:19 am

Yeah, I was about to say this and ask you <B>WHAT</B> exactly it is, as I wasn't able to figure it out.
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Post by Geekwithpower » Sun Apr 13, 2003 5:53 am

Hard to describe..it looks like she has no nose, for one. It's like, too round, undetailed, and flat.
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Post by Chris » Sun Apr 13, 2003 6:23 am

The left eye is lower than the right, Trag. :) It's also shaped wrong from the perspective you drew her, just ever so slightly.<p>[ 13 April 2003: Message edited by: Chris ]
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Post by TK-204 » Sun Apr 13, 2003 8:13 am

... nice reflection though :)
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Post by General Edor Crespin » Sun Apr 13, 2003 12:02 pm

Yeah, looks rather flat. Rest of it looks nice though. :)
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Post by Cloud » Mon Apr 14, 2003 1:43 am

*notices sword*<BR>Aw, come on, stop picking on her for her face. I think it looks "cute" :p.<BR>Looking good.

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Post by Atx » Mon Apr 14, 2003 4:49 am

Nice use of colour....and a very striking pose!<BR>What the picture is lacking is just structure which is something you pick up after using lots and lots of photo reference and deep study of basic anatomy and its major muscle groups....it takes time but it seems that you're on your way to grasping it.<BR>Keep up the good work! <BR>Your composition is cool!<BR> :)
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Post by Vince T » Mon Apr 14, 2003 4:34 pm

Thanks for the hints, I was already desperate! Here are some more images.<P>NOTE: They're all from sketches which are ore than three years old :)<P>Shiromy:<BR> :D<BR> Image
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Post by dugg » Mon Apr 14, 2003 5:33 pm

Well I like them very much :)<P>Great work :D
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Post by Vince T » Tue Apr 15, 2003 10:06 pm

Some more! I hope the shading's better this time!<P>From Left to right: Shiromy, Jarris Vaylon, Vince<BR> Image <P>Shiromy (in combat suit)<BR> Image <P>Witch mastressTyleea(Vince's ex-love and later enemy)<BR> Image
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Post by Avenger One » Tue Apr 15, 2003 10:10 pm

Not bad Vince :) great work!
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Post by Ice Knight » Tue Apr 15, 2003 10:27 pm

nice

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Post by TK-204 » Wed Apr 16, 2003 8:13 am

Wow :) You seem to have created your own style! Great work!
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